Once upon a time in a little town called Foodsville there were these two boys called Potato Chip and Onion Dip they were both Kiwiana.One day they were walking down the road and a cow blew up.''Oh No it's Hot Chip and his side kick Tomato Sauce" said Onion Dip.
They sent their evil minuns to fight them because they were to hungry so they sat down and had some hot chips and tomato sauce.
Mean while Chip and Dip were fighting the evil minuns.
''We will meet again" shouted Hot chip and he blasted off with his sidekick.
''When is again?" said dip I don't know.
So they just walked back home to their doughnut house and had some afternoon tea.
Later that night dip had a sleep over at chips house. As they went to bed they heard a little creek it sounded like the window was opening ''What is that asked chip worried?".
Then they heard an evil laugh.''Oh no it's hot chip and his sidekick again"
As the boys tried to escape from the room tomato sauce squirted a hunk of sticky tomato sauce at them so there feet were stuck to the floor.
Suddenly the door slammed open and Mr Nacho Cheese (Hot chips dad)came blasting in with his nacho cheese ray shooting every moving food in the room of course apart from chip and dip.
part 2 coming out next month
Nice Jack, I can't wait until next week. Have you thought about pavlova, and punctuation as in
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Awesome as story jack sound good to eat.
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